tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post8408254658017478616..comments2023-05-09T05:03:16.441-04:00Comments on Quilt of Dragonflies: Write on Wednesdays: Notre Dame de ParisClairehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14912028491141986358noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post-12779000746280042222011-12-03T08:34:55.677-05:002011-12-03T08:34:55.677-05:00Beautifully written - it has a very dreamy sureal ...Beautifully written - it has a very dreamy sureal feeling at the begining and the change in emotion is very cleverly done.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post-68690391777753093642011-12-02T01:48:30.282-05:002011-12-02T01:48:30.282-05:00Murderer of the light! Great phrase - loved it.
I...Murderer of the light! Great phrase - loved it.<br /><br />I liked your piece, loved the feel of it and the turn in mood was well done.InkPaperPenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14595595934607152505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post-7726017414681069262011-12-01T00:00:05.106-05:002011-12-01T00:00:05.106-05:00Effortless and inspiring imagery once again, pleas...Effortless and inspiring imagery once again, pleasure to read with such illustrations freely offered.sjphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05772883091207430753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post-46320780703729836002011-11-29T23:46:15.043-05:002011-11-29T23:46:15.043-05:00Great piece - you so cleverly change the mood from...Great piece - you so cleverly change the mood from excitement and wonder to vengeful fury. Well done Claire!<br />Katespring days, new growthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12809670414388039109noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post-35331327951280143642011-11-29T22:51:32.491-05:002011-11-29T22:51:32.491-05:00I really wish I could see this scene as it was in ...I really wish I could see this scene as it was in your head when you were writing it! It's left me in suspense, I want to know the meaning of the candles in the water, the motives of those trying to sink them, and why our narrator was so angered by it! Interesting story.Janellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06459852025135239788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post-32020388440741477012011-11-29T18:42:26.589-05:002011-11-29T18:42:26.589-05:00I really like the image you've painted. Good f...I really like the image you've painted. Good for her, saving the 'light' and beauty. Great piece!!Lillie McFerrinhttp://lilliemcferrin.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post-37814352236422333722011-11-29T12:57:12.635-05:002011-11-29T12:57:12.635-05:00"The candles sailed majestically down the riv..."The candles sailed majestically down the river, spinning lazily in the current and drifting out, away from civilization to a place where they could be free." Great line! <br /><br />I think I would feel just as angry if someone was sinking those beautiful lighted boats as well.Ramblings of an Honest Hearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12421173190119742184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post-31402091318228247462011-11-28T19:00:14.690-05:002011-11-28T19:00:14.690-05:00What do you mean by mirth? I also love boats and c...What do you mean by mirth? I also love boats and candles, but I wasn't really trying to make my story funny...Clairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14912028491141986358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post-65067389157339162082011-11-28T17:52:10.313-05:002011-11-28T17:52:10.313-05:00Great tale, I know that kind of mirth, I love boat...Great tale, I know that kind of mirth, I love boats and candles.Kirsty @ Bowerbird Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12511849105347338654noreply@blogger.com