tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post7338565391093066907..comments2023-05-09T05:03:16.441-04:00Comments on Quilt of Dragonflies: The ShowClairehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14912028491141986358noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post-4747411466090401232011-11-01T18:48:44.292-04:002011-11-01T18:48:44.292-04:00When I first look at the title and read the first ...When I first look at the title and read the first line, I was a little confused. But then I realized why you named it "the show". I espeacially like the line "dancing the steady waltz of rain". It has a good rhythm and describes the rhythmic pitter patter of raindrops. Good poem! Just check the format, it kinda looked like you couln't fit the whole poem line on one space line.Katienoreply@blogger.com