tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post4517304595534260898..comments2023-05-09T05:03:16.441-04:00Comments on Quilt of Dragonflies: Five Sentence Fiction: SecretsClairehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14912028491141986358noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post-20761653216344976812011-12-09T14:56:48.172-05:002011-12-09T14:56:48.172-05:00Oh, I thought it was about 'Consumption' t...Oh, I thought it was about 'Consumption' too! This story could go anywhere - great job!Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15147301486864145167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post-55524911728465275132011-12-06T02:43:32.370-05:002011-12-06T02:43:32.370-05:00This gives me an image of a historical novel, a bi...This gives me an image of a historical novel, a bit "Tess of the d'Urbervilles " or "The French Lieutenant's Woman" or something, dramatic woman dying of consumption/TB. Very mysterious and so well written Claire.<br />Katespring days, new growthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12809670414388039109noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post-32465238083295537902011-12-02T22:10:10.271-05:002011-12-02T22:10:10.271-05:00Lovely! It's intriguing and full of dark image...Lovely! It's intriguing and full of dark imagery that works so well!Lilliehttp://lilliemcferrin.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3973188080616386087.post-24793353465786732462011-12-02T19:58:57.908-05:002011-12-02T19:58:57.908-05:00Wonderful! I just stumbled across this. Very pow...Wonderful! I just stumbled across this. Very powerful and thought-provoking. I wonder where she is going, and why...? Lovely language - inky memories and clouded eyes. The 'dilating' of the senses... Very beautiful descriptions. I have just spent the last 3 hours writing an entirely different type of story, so my head is spinning! Must find my bed! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com